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In A Hotel Room

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In A Hotel Room

In a hotel room together, locked behind the door
A king-sized bed and heater, who could ask for more.

The bath is built for two the bubbles already on the bill
Bubble bath for lovers there can be no bigger thrill.

To wash the bubbles from his skin as he steps out in all his glory
Waiting on the bed for me, now there’s another story...

Two lovers meet in hotel rooms the magic goes on and on
To be entwined with the one you love with baby oil for fun.

To make love on the king-sized bed, to make love on the chair
No body is watching just the two of you are there.

Hotel rooms were made for fun not the weary and the tired
What better hobby could one have when one is retired?.

In fact I cannot wait now until I’m old and grey
And just hope these Hotels are open when it’s my retirement day.

© 6/02/2013

Contest Entry : In a hotel room .

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  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:03:00 PM

    Me like so much the line: "To be entwined with the one you love with baby oil for fun"..... lol Congrats though....

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:30:00 AM

    a fun and spicy take on the contest theme, congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Mandy! Winning piece for a winning spot :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:35:00 AM

    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:40:00 PM

    this is the happiest and funniest one I've seen so far, going thru the winners list. I love it, Mandy. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:11:00 PM

    lWow! I've really been missing out in my retirement. Congratulations on a fun entry and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Mandy, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:41:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 9:55:00 AM

    congrats Mandy, the imagery so powerful..

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Mandy congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:24:00 AM

    is there a cold shower in there?, only to cool down before round two....just love this Mandy,, you are the perfect tease, and i love every word you write

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha sorry harry my comment there just morphed up from Seren to you but a cold one may help lol xx
    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    couldn't have you having all the fun with your racy one xx
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:12:00 AM

    Haha. Well done Mandy, welcome to the racy hotel room poems. Loved it....Seren

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha couldn't have you having all the fun with your racy room lol xx
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:10:00 AM

    Ooh la la, you have turned your hotel room into a steam room.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Now that's an idea xx
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:55:00 AM

    Smile, just don't go slipping and sliding all over the sheets, I hear Walmart has the baby oil on sale, you ought to buy a few bottles before retirement day Mandy, Happy Romping Trails, at the Beau Sexy Hotel, MUA! Top of the morning to you xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha i can see my sliding straight off onto the floor knowing my luck lo xx