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In a hotel room

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Below is the poem entitled In a hotel room which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In a hotel room

A fter a long drive we arrive

N ice looking hotel reception
A feeling of sensual anticipation 
U ndue pressures on our emotions
G irl  hands over keys to lovers convention
H ug you close, touch to please
T urning into a wanton tease
Y ou open the door to let paradise release

W e let our bodies do the talking
E motion shaking fingers do the walking
E asily we touch to thrill
K nowing our love we will fulfill
E asing out of our clothes, nerves are seared
N estling my breasts with your beard
D arling all inhibitions have disappeared

A ll feelings of frustration  no longer exist
W et with longing for much more than  a kiss
A t home our loving was getting staid
Y et here we are getting  well and truly laid





Just goes to show that a naughty weekend away can spice up your life.


Dated 6 February 2013.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Very naughty - love it!

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha Anne Lise 7* with extras ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Nice and naughty acoustic. Congratulations on the placement.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:34:00 PM
    The last line was really funny, Seren. I didn't expect it from you!! Congrats on your win. It was nice to finally see what you wrote.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 9:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Andrea it rhymed didnt it. Rofl. Dont tell me you think of me as miss perfect.....Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:00:00 PM
    And should be experienced often. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wouldnt know the Married bit Joyce, just a vivid imagination i guess and Mills and Boon ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Seren, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD ... Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Whew! No need for the heater tonight, Seren! Very nice. Congratulations!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Roy, will send some ice over...Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:31:00 PM
    nice job! i love the format you've chosen. congrats on your win...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Ilene...Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:39:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Joseph...Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Knew this one would place surprised not at the top lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Seren congrats on your win. Much deserved. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:54:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and fascinating write my friend! I loved each and every line of this terrific poem! What a sensually ecstatic piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell, guess it is a bit different...Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
    YIKES! All of a sudden, it's gotten extremely warm in here! You much be careful, I'm an old dude! LOL I'm booking my next flight as we speak! Yummy!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Jack, I am sure you can write a funny poem referring to your answer. Let me know time of arrival will meet plane....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:18:00 AM
    wow David got here before me, love this Seren, pure poetry, one sees you in many lights, all beautiful

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry, you are a true friend. Yep David pipped you at the post, lol, ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
    and what did you say the name of the hotel was lol...love it....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx David thought I might have shocked you. Hotel Serendipity of course. Lol
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 5:45:00 AM
    oh you naughty girl, i just love this, now I see what you meant lol xx bad girl

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Mandy, loved your rendering as well, ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Very instructive, constructive, seductive, perhaps reproductive! I gasped at the last line... Terry (good poem)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops gasp at being astounded, or hmmm a gasp of omg. Lol
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:04:00 AM
    Hi Seren yes I must give this a try will speak to the wife straight away, great acrostic, have a good day, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Owen hope she says yes......Seren