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When i die

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When i die

With sight forever closed
	And voice eternally locked
	Shine still will the immortal sun
	Birds at my wake keep sing on to life as incense burn
When I die;
	In neat dis-order, ants will march
	And buzzing silently the bees shall lament
	While I shall lie still,
	All gone stealth and stilt.
	Finally dead from undying death  
	With sightless eyes and mirthless mirth, my bane.
When I die .               

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  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:49:00 AM
    I commend your The daring subject matter of the poem and sound use of literary devices by the poet.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:58:00 AM
    'Undying death'! Very nice... Terry

    Noel Avatar Ndifon Noel
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks terry....