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When

when the will becomes weak 
and you find it hard to speak
when the spirit becomes dry
and your heart can not fly
when the world has you down
and you can't help but frown
when you can't raise your head
and you just wish you were dead
when all hope has faded away
and negativity seems to be there to stay
fall upon your knees
surrender to God and ask forgive me please

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  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Dear April: Great poem! God is the way, the truth, and the life! Have a great day.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 4/24/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well thank you!
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Sad and hopeful at the same time. You have definately found the right answer.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 4/24/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well thanks for the review!
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:20:00 PM
    This is the second christain themed poem I commented on today, that makes two since I've been here. I really like the scene set. Good work. I am late on this comment and hope you are still writing. Great work.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 4/24/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes i am!and thank for the kind review i have the latest one i wrote restoration you might really enjoy!
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 12:02:00 PM
    A touching and very well written poem April, I like it. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/7/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks and you too!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:26:00 PM
    Very nicely done........... George

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/7/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Hi April Great poem!!! It is hard to stay positive, when it seems as if the majority of the people are trying to drag you down. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Peace Sheol

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/7/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    your welcome and thank you very much for the comment!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:36:00 AM
    BRILLIANT my dear April! Love and hugs, Jack xox

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/7/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    why thank you for the positive feedback!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:42:00 AM
    !!!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:48:00 AM
    So inspiring and touching. I love it:)

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/7/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    why thank you very much