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How do i make you feel

how do i make you feel
how i kiss you on your neck
how do i make you feel
out of my presence are you a wreck

how do i make you feel
when i nibble on your ear
how do i make you feel
when i enter into your atmosphere

how do i make you feel
when i run my fingers down your chest
how do i make you feel
when you lay your head on my breast

how do i make you feel
when i massage your feet
how do i make you feel
cuddled does your heart skip a beat

how do i make you feel 
i really really need to know
how do i make you feel
before my love continues to grow

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:27:00 PM

    Wow, now I really love this poem. I must check out the form. I didn't formally thank you for your comment on my Gaijin or Haijin clerihew, so I'm doing that now. Thanks again and I am for sure adding this to my favorites. Great Job or as Gigno would say !!! haha, a little shot at Gigno.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 4/24/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol glad you really enjoyed this one thanks for the great review!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Very lovely...just what we all want to know I think, we are appreciated for giving all we have and want to know if they feel the same way. Beautiful

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 2/7/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Amazing write April! I like the confident-not so confident aspect, like you're sure but need confirmation - very nice. Well done.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 2/7/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx!