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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Another beautifully written poem. Great subject. I am in awe. ~Kilmer~

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:24:00 AM
    God morning Scribe, I wrote the cricket poem... lol... what was i thinking, it seemed right at the time... xox~PD

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Thank you for the hi Scribe, sorry to hear about your daughter... but, I'm glad you by her side... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Aw this beauty gave me goosebumps..Yep i do believe God gives a chance to everyone even to those life was stolen from.them.Misted my eyes.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:38:00 AM
    One great poem. I see the word mija in there. Tell me - do you speak Spanish? This poem is deep. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:11:00 AM
    you never fail to inject such feelins of awe in this reader of your wondrous poetry Marlon,, this is totally a new concept to me, and as got my imagination racing...

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Marlon, an amazing story from your pen. a unique meeting between sleep and death. More than half your poem is well crafted with the best imagery when it comes to telling a story with description through a poem. A heartfelt ending... The first 4 lines are what i love reading when looking for good poetry... always~ your little soup sis... PD

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:57:00 PM
    When our spirit is open and aware, we open our minds to great possibilities, there is so much mystery that remains unraveled over our loved ones connecting in a timely way, but one thing I know for certain, there's nothing but a thin veil dividing us, no great chasms there, so glad you shared this Marlon, your awareness makes me rejoice and smile, blessed be, you, faithful one xxx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:19:00 PM
    A very touching beautiful poem. Hopeful....

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Family Happiness and togetherness - Can I borrow the sweet grandmother (?)- Love your poem Marlon! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:21:00 PM
    I love the play on words here...loving the first few stanzas..of course I had to read it several times in order to understand it..and you put flames to your pen on this it!!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Dr. Linton Bradley, this is a very cool conceptual piece. From the title, I wasn't expecting such a theme -- it caught me off-guard, which is always enjoyable for me when it comes to reading poetry. Such an intriguing way to tackle the subject. The poetic voice in this poem has your unique fingerprint to it, but there is something different to it this time....haven't quite figured it out yet. The 1st stanza is so good, I might have to plagiarize it one day -- just kidding! I won't plagiarize the stanza.