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At a glance of elegy

At a glance of elegy

In a crack of dawn
of a beautiful morn
here is a smile 
that  cross my mind
hugged  me with it’s warm

draped me with a deep yearning
flared up my feeling
with flaming fire

my longing
to see your smile

I blended myself
to your existance
 filled me with
your glorious piece of love
deep in my compassionate ground
to eleminate 
my elegiac mind

how i adored
the moment
when you were there

let me fly unto you
in every dawn
in every morn


sukmawati komala
05 february 2013

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Dear Sukmawati, hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A very warm Welcome to the Soup. I do believe I shall join the ranks of commenters TO YOUR POETIC Tapestries. You write very well for I feel YOUR LOVE of YOUR life in this POEM. Superb PEN. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:14:00 AM

    another very nice write Sukmawati xo's ,,,, thank you for reading my haiku six ;}

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 1:54:00 PM

    Nicely done

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 4:06:00 AM

    wow am i glad to see you have posted, sukmawati, this is wonderful poetry...

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:53:00 PM

    So beautiful... :o) Where did all you poetry go? I was stopping by to read some again but it is all gone? But I will read what is here.And be happy with that. <3 (o:

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:06:00 PM

    i have read all of your poems. im glad to see another amazing poet on this website...i am inspired, thank you. with love, izzy

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:50:00 PM

    On the wings of glory she soars to new heights, beautiful poetry Suki, so glad to hear from you. Glad you posted a few gems, love xxx