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Nature In Our Garden

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Nature In Our Garden

                        

Today opening my door to descent the steps to visit my garden
makes my dreams come true, my green garden enlightens 
my heart most of the time i spend it there, whispering with 
my roses, watching the very old green trees, watering the 
green grass, i love it. 

Suddenly my heart starts beating just found an envelope with 
white roses sleeping at my doorsteps, anxious to discover the 
sender, with a huge smile my surprise, it was from my darling, 
he wrote:

You are the woman of my dreams, I am taking the liberty to 
announce, you are my reason to live, if you are not in my life 
I will not tolerate my existence one moment longer, I need to 
become stronger to carry you towards our love nest share our 
hot body, love the love that will slowly put off that burning fire 
between us under our green trees very soon.
                                 
Lay your roses down, free your hand to hold mine, together, 
we will walk towards our green garden and dream of that day 
when our eyes will meet to become bride and bridegroom 
surrounded by the green trees everywhere, friends clapping 
so hard for us to engage with that beautiful touch of our lips, 
a sign you belong to me forever. 

Will you marry me my woman with green eyes? Oh! yes yes 
I screamed not realizing he is not here but a letter in my 
hand, the invitation for my own wedding, how blessed we are.
                               
The weather was happy the full moon lighted up the outside 
view to watch my roses blossom and maybe tomorrow we will 
walk together not only to get married we will upgrade our 
thoughts to the highest peak,we will reach our goals by living 
as one, we will enjoy whenever we can and endure when we must, 
we will not anticipate trouble or unhappiness about what may 
or may not happen, but we will walk towards our green garden, 
soon as husband and wife. 

We will not allow any obstacle stop us from becoming what 
needed to be successful, in love always, my heart was 
instantly beating towards positive thoughts a husband to love 
to sleep with, to cook, to wash, to wake up in the morning have 
our cup of coffee in the fresh air, i will stand by my man, 
no matter what.
                                   
A beautiful marriage in my green garden, all surrounded by huge 
green trees ancient as this house belonged to my grandfather
and I inherited it.
I felt like getting married with all those greeneries surrounding 
our guests i will place 100 white chairs on each side on the green
grass, and the aisle in the middle with green ribbons on the chairs,
at the end will be the priest standing behind a white table on it 
a beautiful green table cloth the chalice and cross next to the bible  
between white roses and greeneries. 

I need to sleep to wake up early run to my garden and prepare
the roses to share and whisper to me how beautiful they will 
become on that unforgettable day, the green grass will emerge 
to beautify their existence for our guests, the huge green trees 
will wave endlessly with the wind, a flow of some breeze.

We will be married as soon as he walks through my door,maybe today, tomorrow or after tomorrow.
Now we became a family with my green garden it will live to shine and
share the amazing wedding of two lovers married at last with the green 
beauty of our garden.

At that moment my thoughts tried to trick me in a discrete 
conversation saying, how do you know you will be happy? 
can you guarantee that happiness will exist? those were my 
repulsive thoughts, disregarding them, i shook my head
with sophistication a vigorous reply we will become
Thee couple in love forever. 

Our unique marriage in our Green Garden Of Eden was televised that day
a huge surprise to us and our guests by a close friend as a wedding gift. 



Therese Bacha                                                                 
 20/5/2013
              Contest for PD. Nature.. Win N0. 8

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Big heartfelt congratulations with your awesome win and great write/story my dear friend Therese! So love & enjoyed your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing! Warm big hugs, Leonora

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/24/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well well. thank you Leonora for passing by, it makes me so happy. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 1:30:00 AM
    wow lovely story, even better because it is true......Seren

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/23/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Seren, thank you for passing by,It nice of you. Terry.
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Beautifully presented.... I was there, Under the huge green tree. You were beautiful and he was the envy of every man there.... Great writing... win deserved.... Love, always.... Jake

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jake, so nice your compliments. Have a great evening. Terry.
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 1:05:00 PM
    Best wishes and congrats on your win, S.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nice of you to pass by, thank you so much. Terry
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 9:12:00 AM
    a very beautiful garden and story Terry, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PD, I am always so touched when you accept me in your contests, you are such a faithful friend. And accepting me gives me the strength to go on, being appreciated by you , is an honor. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:48:00 AM
    What a wonderful story this is !!! Lovely of you to share this love with us! Beautiful !!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Carrie, nice to see your smile again, thank you so much. Terry
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win.This is so beautiful - like a fairy tale. Something that you could make a movie out of. Thanks for sharing..... lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Lucy, i never replied on this comment, so sorry, i just saw it. I hope you are enjoying your trip. Love Terry
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:53:00 AM
    My humble congrats... I indeed enjoyed reading this pen esp. The 'Green...' thoughts. cheers ~ A. O

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/23/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So nice of you to pass by, thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:21:00 AM
    My big hearty congratulations on your top win and superb write my dear friend Therese. An amazing piece indeed and I've extremely enjoyed reading it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing your gems. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/23/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Leonora, loved reading your comments, so warm, thank you so much. You to have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:13:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/22/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara, and you to congratulation on your win, Have a beautiful weekend. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Congratulations Terry on a beautiful poem and win. Namaste. Rick

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/21/2013 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, your horse reminded me when i used to ride a black horse at 5 AM with my children......thank you for being so nice to pass by. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Dear Terry, stopping by to thank you for always considering my contest... Congratulations with your top winning poem... always~ Linda

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/21/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Lady PD, as usual i really need to thank you so much, i am honored to be accepted in your contests.....I hope i can keep up with your unbelievable surprises . Thank you again. Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:22:00 AM
    the longed for, not always seen, love and sweet romance, between, two people with no parting, loving tween, when the true love gets to dance, the sound of sweet romance, surges through! and 2 lovers get their due, ration of the passion branch, its true.... Don re:Two Lovers ... Therese Bacha

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/22/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Here comes the handsome guy....Don, ,, thanks you for the beautiful poem.....so nice of you....have a wonderful weekend wherever yo are.....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Romantic! Just like I like it! :) Therese, how can I thank you for your love and support? Words fail me! I wish I could send you a flower...like one of the ones you wrote so beautifully about. A flower of gratitude for your generous heart and spirit! :) Hugs from my hideaway! Don't worry dear...I'm on the mend!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/7/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen bon voyage and enjoy your stay....i am so happy to know you will be great........take care hope to hear your will be back soon.....Terry xoxoox
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Wow Terry, this is amazing poetry, such love and sincerity, and what a joy to read....

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/7/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry......its nice of you Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:24:00 AM
    Oh ...... I like this poem very much Terry. - It's gorgeous. - - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/7/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Anne......you always have nice comments......have a beautiful day......Terry oxox
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
    This is a brilliantly written write my friend! I enjoyed reading this awesome poem this afternoon! what a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/5/2013 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my faithful friend.......Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:34:00 AM
    What beautiful dreamy words.Worfs each romantic yearn for..Beautifully penned dear

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/5/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmaine it is so nice of you to always pass by......i love your comments....Love Terry xoxo