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Below is the poem entitled How Could You which was written by poet April Mitchell. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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How Could You

how could you say you love me
and crush my heart so bad
why would you treat me so
and make me feel so sad
i don't deserve what you give
i've given you my body and soul
but yet you walk all over me
and my heart has to pay the toll
i surrendered to you fully
you thought i'd forever be around
but now i'm saving my mending heart
for the new love that i've found

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:57:00 PM
    I had already made a comment but got booted grrrr. I know I said I like this poem. It is a sad theme, but well written. I relate too much to the theme I think. Great work.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 4/24/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the review !glad you enjoyed
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
    This sounds like a song. If you repeated a few verses, maybe it could be. I like it.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 9:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you glad you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:09:00 PM
    A brave and deeply felt piece. Very nice writing. Jack

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 9:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much for the kind words
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Glad I made you laugh April. Rick

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 9:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh how sweet!yes you did!have a pleasant night!
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:14:00 PM
    S taste of revenge.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol glad you liked!
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Dear April, Well, Spring is around the corner your name will find its mach Not only in name but also in love! Of course you know that is better to love And lose than not to love. Consider also that your new love, who is around the corner, Never would be possible if the old one was still there! Your poem, although painful It screams with beauty and love! Wonderful!

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love this review!and thank you very much for the kind and true words!appreciated very much!glad you liked it
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:32:00 AM
    Sad, sincere, lovely poem written from the heart.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell
    Date: 2/5/2013 5:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much!