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Unpredictable Morning

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Unpredictable Morning

The morning sun falls
Noises awake, passing crowds
once quiet again

Stand on the cold feet
Dew still not fade by the lights
Sipping my hot tea

Rectangle door closed
The framework offers the view
My sight clustered straight

Enjoyed the greenish
While the sun turns into gloom
It's ready to rain

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:23:00 PM

    Great write, I love the unpredictable mornings and rainy days.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 3/25/2013 5:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joana :) glad to have you in my page :D have a great day :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:23:00 PM

    !!!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :D
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 9:00:00 PM

    Coffee because I am not a tea person.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/7/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Coffee could be better :D sometimes I had morning coffee too :D thank you Rick for your lovely visit, really a pleasure to have your present this morning :D , wishing you a great afternoon there :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:59:00 PM

    I hope you awake to a day as sunny as your disposition. Hugs Rick. I enjoyed this poem, wish I could join you for a coffee.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Hello Yanny, a very deep imagery.. hope you will enjoy what is to come..it rain here this morning... i enjoyed waking up to the not knowing.. LOL.. excellent poem...PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/6/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda, your visit always make my day :D, have a wonderful day there :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:37:00 AM

    Lovely poem.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/5/2013 2:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vesna :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:51:00 PM

    You should see my state of Utah , we have so many days where the weather keeps changing all within one day. This reminds me of those days! very nice, Yanny

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/5/2013 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, that's really a new thing for me, must be surprising day Andrea, thank you for your visit, glad to see you a round, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny