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About This Poem

A Pink Crystal Dawn

beneath the silence of ice-encased trees

the sky’s pink dawn lies captured

in the pond’s crystal depths


For the "I'll Have One Kimo Please"Poetry Contest of Rick Parise

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    Red OMara
    Date: 4/7/2013 8:30:00 PM
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    Twenty three syllables of neat and unadulterated beauty. - Red,
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    Ruby Honeytip
    Date: 3/10/2013 12:32:00 PM
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    This is just beautiful :-) Gorgeous imagery! I had no idea what Kimo Poetry was until now and this seems like a very well thought out example. Thanks for sharing...Love Ruby xx
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    Tanya Harrington
    Date: 2/27/2013 1:16:00 PM
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    Beautiful Andrea! Congrats. A well deserved win!
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 2/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
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    Nice one Andrea and I see it was a win -congrats-love phyl
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    frank herrera
    Date: 2/21/2013 12:15:00 AM
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    nice win congratulations....saw ARGO on DVD loved it
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 2/19/2013 3:28:00 PM
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    So happy to see my favorite, win the top spot Andrea. I know how much thought you put into creating your poetry and it shows. You are tops in entering contests and that really takes dedication. CONGRATULATIONS on your first place! I see you already took some other top honors. Well l need to do household chores on my day off, but in case l can't get to your other winning poems to congratulate you, l wanted to let you know l saw your First place impressive wins too. Kudos on all of them!!!
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
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    One Kimo from you is worth 10 of mine..lol. congrats dear..BG
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 2/17/2013 7:43:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win! I love Kimo's. This one you can visualize..It's beautiful! Thanks for your comments on our poem "A Longing." It was David's idea to help me start writing again. I didn't give him any ideas...he just knows me. I think it flows perfectly and the couplets just melt. I'm very lucky...And, so are you! You are so talented...thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/17/2013 5:43:00 AM
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    Congrats Andrea on your TOP win in Rick's contest!!I loved this Kimo on my first read.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:49:00 AM
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    Yeah Andrea, Congrats on your first place win dear! "I am doing good, was just bit busy"
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:07:00 AM
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    a sure winning piece,congratulations Andrea....
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 2/16/2013 11:44:00 PM
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    Biggest congratulations my dear friend for being on the top of the list again! Kudos! love always and forever, Leonora
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    jim joyce
    Date: 2/16/2013 11:39:00 PM
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    just love your poetry :)))..what a beautiful image u created
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 2/16/2013 8:17:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your wonderful win.
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 2/16/2013 9:49:00 AM
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    This is just so lovely...delicate too !! Congrats on your win !!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/16/2013 5:29:00 AM
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    Congrats on your great win..I knew it was a winner..Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/15/2013 7:30:00 PM
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    Hello Andrea, how was your Valentine's... did Joe, smoother you with love ;-) ;-) oh yes, the reason I'm here.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 2/15/2013 7:29:00 PM
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    gorgeous imagery Andrea, congrats on your well earned first place
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    Chuma Okonkwo
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:42:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win Andrea. xx
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    Joseph May
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:16:00 PM
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    congrats on a great win Andrea
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    Caleb Smith
    Date: 2/15/2013 5:13:00 PM
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    I knew this was gonna win! It's incredible, Andrea...and thanks for noticing the typo. You're the best.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:54:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your fine first place Andrea! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:34:00 PM
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    I knew this would be a winner! Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea! Love, Kim
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:08:00 PM
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    Andrea congratulation on your big win. Well deserved, a great Kimo. Warm Smiles, Connie
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:59:00 PM
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    I love the "reflection" of 'ice' in the first line and the image of the 'crystal' in the final line. Pure magic, Andrea. Fav. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win. Love, Su

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 2/16/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A perfect example of a Kimo: One frozen scene with absolutely no movement in it. :-)
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:17:00 PM
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    Great win!
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 2/9/2013 3:13:00 PM
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    A beautiful painted scene with words. I can imagine ice-encased trees shimmering within pink dawn sky. Warm Smiles, Connie
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/7/2013 8:29:00 AM
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    Wonderful imagery in these 3 lines!!Lovely write!
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:25:00 PM
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    I will join my friends and extoll the virtues of this lovely piece.
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    Isaiah Zerbst
    Date: 2/6/2013 2:23:00 PM
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    This poem is awesome! Each line has a special picture and meaning of its own, lending to the whole a winning charm. Nicely done!
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