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As I age may there be grace

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As I age may there be grace

As the threads were sorted, 
knots undone
The sun shone, 
I was blessed by warmth
A smile, 
love in your eyes, 
Me

Benches line our path, 
Rest a bit,

Between pilgrimages, 
we chat
Enjoy the quiet, 
peace be with us

The river runs, 
Past obstacles
Flow and float,
rays of love, 
Dreams

All are blessings, 
a cornucopia
Thanksgiving, 
always
For what was, 
what is, 
what will be

Serenity is infinite in these moments
I wonder 
do you feel it? 

Unknotted threads, 
woven into  Our lives, 
one to another
Patterns develop with love

We are older images are clearer
Smiling now, 
it is us, 
shades of light and dark

We hear the strings as they hum, 
warp and weft 
A tapestry continually growing with color

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:50:00 PM
    I like the comparisons contained within..Very creative work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:32:00 AM
    All of us aged, aging seniors can use a bit of grace..especially when we do not readily see it in front of us.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 5:08:00 AM
    Romantic and lovely poem, love through a "long life" and forever. - A poem I like very well, thank you. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:17:00 AM
    beautiful,love the journey