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ON THIS TREASURE HAVEN : CONFESSIONS OF A SOUPER

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ON THIS TREASURE HAVEN : CONFESSIONS OF A SOUPER


ON THIS TREASURE HAVEN : CONFESSIONS OF A SOUPER


Forever is the word I quoth here
For how long I want to be here

Creativity powered  with watts of battery
On this lovely haven of flowing poetry

Oh , a flashback of this tale I would like to share
ever when I held up a poem  with talents spare,

cold douche froze my buds of passions raw
up on the mind where frustrations  sat and thawed

I wandered long ,before I stumbled upon here
words I scribbled on almost everywhere,

seasoned with emotions from mundane to rare
and tossed and turned till it dulled and grayed.

Some poked  with a 'now what' ,and a few sighed,  
a few ignored , many dug  with words which pacified.

Just a couple or two came thumbs up
pulling out the deep thorns of years ' rump.

Past is past , and I don't care , now on the Soup I dwell
With the soup I rise and I fall, on the Soup are my tidings as well

Lost in lyrical  rainbows ,dinner and shower a pineal clock reminder
With amazing  poet pals , treasures from distant worlds meander...

Forever is the word I quoth here
For how long I want to be here

Creativity powered  with watts of battery
On this lovely haven of flowing poetry....


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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Tank you for your kind words! God bless!!!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:18:00 PM
    A true treasure indeed. You have captured it well. Soup mailx2

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:21:00 AM
    smashing piece Mehnaz xx

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:59:00 AM
    Another wonderful poem penned Mehnaz. yes soup is poets' haven and heaven!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:12:00 AM
    no doubting your talent here, Mehnaz..amazing poetry..

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    am honored ...Harry, thank you
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Wow, you sure have hit the nail on the head with this awesome write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a powerful and truthful piece you have written, Great Work!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    glad that you liked it...
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:58:00 PM
    This is really nice. I especially like those last four couplets, which resonate with my feelings exactly!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...good day to you...
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Great work that speaks well of this site and the people here..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much...