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Just Like you

I have dreams too
I have hopes too
I have plans too,
I cry too,
I laugh too,
I fail too,
I succeed too,
sometimes my world is
in black n white too,
sometimes so coloured 
and beautiful,
I make mistakes too
sometimes am so right too,

I pray too
sometimes I just forget tom
I care too
sometimes just 
indifferent
I try hard sometimes too
I relax sometimes and 
just let things be,
I'm just like you,
 just that
you'll never find another 
VIRGINIA like me,
am unique,
JUST LIKE YOU.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:00:00 AM

    Welcome to the soup. You have talent and you can incubate it here. Love this piece

    Kamau Avatar Virginia Kamau Date: 2/7/2013 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Erastus, I appreciate.
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:23:00 AM

    Yes, you are unique Virginia! - No two are alike ..... and it's so nice! - You write very well, and I look forward to getting to know you. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Have fun with poetry! - Love from Norway - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Kamau Avatar Virginia Kamau Date: 2/5/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx so much Anne!!! It is my first time here and I totally love the poems am reading and getting the chance to have mine read too is just awesome. Hope to know you more too!! :-)