Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Never Land Of Indulgence revised version

Oh if i had the wings of an eagle
i would swoon to pick you up
and take you to a place
i call never land
where passion is the beverage
that  parched lips taste
where scorching love cascade
never are your desires gratified 100%
they are continually foraged
upon the bed of elation
diminish burdens and be uninhibited 
let go of all your encumbrances
let me my love liberate your mind and soul
as i take you on a fervent journey
that will tantalize your very essence
and trigger an excruciating nostalgia
that only can be pacified by I

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:36:00 PM

    "where passion is the beverage, that parched lips taste" :O!!!! beautifully written! IM looking forward to reading more work like this

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 4/24/2013 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well thanks but i'm shifting to uplifting!lol but thanks for the review