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Broken Heart

I cannot describe my broken heart
I feel so utterly distraught
      We started out as friends
But now I find out you have a girlfriend
This horrible pain
I'll never see sunshine again
    But rain
My stomach is in knots I feel weak
     I can barely stand up to speak
Oh, when?
    I'll never love again

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  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:27:00 PM

    about your poem: this is very sad, when you can't explain how your heart feels.. this is the way i feel right now.. an excellent verse... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:26:00 PM

    Hi Caleah, you should read my newest poem called "Summers Eve"..lol...i don't know why but I thought of your poem called I AM... my poem is in different reference. But, your poem gave me the idea.. on an I AM poem, and thought... just stopping by to let you know... LINDA

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/12/2013 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, I will!!! I'm so honored to know that you even Thought of my poem, I Am! I'm sure yours is amazing! *Goes to see it right now*