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Meet Crazy Eileen

There is a girl named Eileen
Who's sweet but can get so mean
So don’t cross her path
Or you’ll taste her wrath
Just tell her, “You are the QUEEN!”

She tries so hard just to please
Though some like to tease and tease
She is dynamite
Can set you “alight”
The trigger she might just squeeze

But she can be cuddly too
So lovable through and through
She’s loyal and kind
Though out of her mind
She longs to be friends with you

So try to see her good side
In friends she does take great pride
She’ll give love to you
Make you feel brand new
So take her madness in stride!

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Nice to meet you Eileen, you seem to be sweet like a teddy bear... he he..all cuddly and cute..loyal, and kind... I wish to be one of these friend you take great pride in... I to have enjoyed your path here on the soup...xox~LINDA

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/12/2013 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Linda. I'm honored. You are a poetess of great talent and finesse. Glad to make your acquaintance.
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:04:00 AM

    lol,wonderful write Eileen,like your balance a little of both

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/8/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yup! That's me! ;) A little insane....I've come to accept that......and deal with it as best I can! :) Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Dear Eileen, Believe me, I tried hard to see you as hard and mean and came to the conclusion that your bad side is far better that the good side of many! Moy lipis! Ela piso! Come back and take care! A lovely poem! Thank you!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/8/2013 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ertha piso! :) Pou eseh? Thanks for the post, Demetrios. Always a pleasure to hear from you!
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Great descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Is it like a bio?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/8/2013 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well, I guess so! Should I have named it such? Thanks for the post! Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:42:00 AM

    Wow, very nicely done - JH

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/7/2013 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! So sweet of you! :)
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:38:00 AM

    you are open and very honest, i saw that the other day when, you needed a friend. i love your poetry, and the rest just falls into place,, you are a gem, Queen...

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/7/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Harry.........hugs to you from sunny Cyprus. You are a treasure! :)
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:55:00 PM

    You wrote about your self in a very engaging way. Enjoyed reading your work.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/4/2013 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Carol! There is a bit of a background to this write! Something prompted it....but thanks for taking the time to read! :)
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Eileen is beautiful and a fantastic writer! Thank you for sharing this about you. It's a really cute poem. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:58:00 PM

    hi Eileen, enjoyed your write....yes my friend, You are the Queen,....

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/3/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mehnaz....thanks, my dear! Kind of you! I wouldn't mind being the queen at all! ;) Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 8:21:00 AM

    ‡ Kind Of Like A Wild Mustang, With A Honeybee Thang, LOL. ˜ Good Morning, Sweet Beautiful Eileen, Thought I Would Try And Bring About A Smile Unto Your Precious Heart And Although I Am Not Inclined To Face Walking Atop Eggshells So As To Speak In Re Anyone In This Life And Or Everymore, I Understand The Balance Which Sometimes Turns Anothers Tides Inside ˜ Thank You For Your Kind Lovely Visit And Nice Glimpse Into This Looking Glass' Reflection Of, Beautiful Eileen! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/3/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rachel....you never have to worry, dear. I would never get mad at you! :) Thanks for the lovely write and for the care! Don't walk on eggshells. I'm half a world away! ;)
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Hi Eileen count me as a friend loved this limerick to, all the best Owen

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/3/2013 4:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm so privileged to have good friends here on the soup...such as yourself! :) Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:50:00 PM

    I see many good sides not just one. I count you as a friend. Have a good night.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/3/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm honored! Thanks every so much, Richard. It means a lot!