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Dove of peace

The sky  is dark  and foreboding
the sky of the night waits
The eerie shape of the moon is hidden
When suddenly a small chink appears
a weak light is projected downward
getting stronger by the minute
In that shaft of light is the shadow
of a bird carrying in its beak 
an olive branch he flies off 
towards the fighting  zone
where the  heads of 
Government are convening
Dropping the branch on the table
he chirps then flies off to wait.


 

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Excellent , yes this is very very good xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/3/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:06:00 AM

    An incredible picture you have painted with your words, Seren! I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Love, Kim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/3/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Kim ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:41:00 PM

    The write has plenty of awesome symbolism! A very excellent poem! I totally enjoyed reading this fine piece this evening! What a masterful poem! Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/3/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You always say nice things about my work Russell, thank you....Seren