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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:44:00 AM
    wow one can get caught up in your adventure, Mehnaz, that is how good your poetry is....

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Sounds like fun!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 3:50:00 AM
    Wonderful poem!

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    Date: 2/3/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Vesna...
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:31:00 PM
    hey where was this awesome poem when the video game poetry contest was going on. It would have placed for sure!! well, when I was young, i was fastest runner in my class. Those were many years ago!!! (before internet games too so I used my own legs. haha)

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    Date: 2/2/2013 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hehe, am always late...and a lousy runner....thanks Andrea..
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:54:00 AM
    A fun write Mehnaz, enjoyed xxx

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    Date: 2/2/2013 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Rose...