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giving back

Excrement and urine
Tears and spit
Wax and vomit
Snot and sweat
Hair and nails
Rust and breath
Words and verses
Seeds and milk

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  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Hm..very interesting work indeed. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:52:00 PM

    I am not sure if this is what our children give us or our parents as they age. Either way, I like your perspective.

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 3:15:00 PM

    An interesting perspective... from 'the other side'... Terry (good poem)

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:17:00 PM

    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:44:00 AM

    ..................... ‡ Lovely, *

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    ;-)