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Within Me

Every game is an opportunity
Every act is a chance to shine
Discipline is something we all need
But sometimes, passion takes over.

I want you to know how I feel
That every loss is a scar
And every victory is a medal
I wear them all with pride.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:33:00 PM

    A very deep Dramatic poem from your end. love the last four lines the most... behind every scar is a medal to be proud of in some form... an excellent poem.. wish you had more to read.. It will be nice to read more of your work. Always~ LINDA

    Walker Avatar Jonathan Walker Date: 2/7/2013 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're very generous, thank you for your kind words.
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:46:00 PM

    Very beautiful poem, straight to the point and inspiring.

    Walker Avatar Jonathan Walker Date: 2/6/2013 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Virginia.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:23:00 AM

    Very nicely said, just remember if we didn't loose sometimes we wouldn't realize what winning felt like or know how others felt when they lost, which makes us better people. Good poem

    Walker Avatar Jonathan Walker Date: 2/2/2013 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Donna, very true.