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Shaft of Light- For contest

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Shaft of Light- For contest

Black clouds ever surrounding me
But look, a bright ray of light I see

From where does this light appear
Has it come from far or from near

A million thoughts enter my mind
A sign from above, that I’m behind

Quick explanations though, never pass
Nor do a thousand, I have grown crass 

About this shaft of light what can be told
I don’t know now, maybe when I am old

Desire to know, imbedded since our youth
Philosophy teaches there really is no truth 



Penned 2/2/2013
Contest: Shaft of Light

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:51:00 PM
    I am just sorry I haven't discovered your poetry sooner, I've loved every poem I read so far, keeping penning, hugs xxx

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/13/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for the lovely comment. I was doing a lot on the phone last couple of days so I'm getting back to comments I may have missed, thank you so much.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:55:00 PM
    I like..I like a lot! Well done :)

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/2/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Actually I have caught two errors one in each poem. Thanks for such inspiring comments.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 5:51:00 AM
    You've got a good shot at it with this one, my good friend! Well penned... good luck!

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/2/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for your kind words.