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Interlocking Love -

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Interlocking Love -

I gave her the quiver,
teeth and tongue a tornado in that fever fruit,
she offered the slick sin, the skin of savage symphony,
it was a technique of tender tickle
the absence of which producing terrifying tease,
inner thighs tight on my cheeks in a moment of sprayed splenor,
her hands around my head as if they were a crown,
sex sinking so deep into nerves that love was pain with a demand,
hair of tangled trust entwined in my grip of desperate possession,
she got my every inch, several at that and dared no more,
in my thrust towards heroism the serenity
of helplessness overcame me and I knew she was my Queen,
nails in my ribs and her bite on my neck,
our fragilities made of us beasts conquering falsehoods of fatality,
names encoded in sweat and scratches -


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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Intensely passionate write....Great use of imagery...Moving

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 9/5/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very moving indeed Eileen - thank you - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Brilliant -- Justin, you caught my attention again, so I am reading through your poems. Lately I don't always comment as much as I read, which might be a conundrum when it comes to poetry sites. Aside from the obviously lovely sensual imagery, you used alliteration very effectively. Actually, you seem to use alliteration effectively a lot. I think you might be a living thesaurus of sorts. I mean that as a compliment.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/19/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    There is great musical quality in alliteration, glad you respect this aspect of our craft too my friend - I revere the elasticity of our language; words will let us play freely if we get know their truth and emotion and build our own with them Thanks for the compliments - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:18:00 PM
    JUSTIN, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/15/2013 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My comments are kind for you my Sphinx because your talent is a gift, your friendship a smile in the light of inspiration - Thanks for the sweetness Linda - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Now this is one sultry write. Mmmhmmm, that is HOT. Your on fire lol. Sounds like an awesome time.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/5/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thats what she said - Good Times indeed Jay - don't encourage me! Delighted that this experience is good for you - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Hey Justin! Wow - such passion, worded so impressively. Love the fifth line the best--but seriously, all was great. Hope you're well and keep up the great work. Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/5/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Life has been good & true to me, especially the more I learn to interprate it effectively Laura - Yeah, those were fun lines - J.A.B. %
    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/5/2013 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and line 8 :)
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 5:37:00 PM
    About your poem: fever fruit* WOW *Justin, the poem is filled of passion, and the most wonderful feeling of intimacy. I guess I will end my comment in a very respectful WOW~ About them cheeks... wink! mmmmmmmmm to the fever fruit once again...PD

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/4/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes my Sphinx, unrehearsed intimacy is a bounty of the most tasteful giving - so glad that you visited again - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Hello J.A.B. i must say it is nice to put a face with your poetry.. ha, not that I mind the awesome avatars you had on your account. xox~PD

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/4/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am happy that you like my face PD. - your images are very intriguing as well - the best pictures of all though are the ones that your Divine poetry produce - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Boy do I remember those days long ago when love was so passionate. Nice to be young. Enjoy for fifty something sneaks up on ya!

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/4/2013 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Intermediate life changing cycles are very real indeed Donna - bio-rhythms, appetites, stamina are susceptable to change for better or worse as we age, but hey, lets break some biological rules! J.A.B. %