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flutter and stream

flutter and stream
quiver and sweat
weep and shout
spasms of intense sensation 
visualization of pure bliss
hot breath of life
divine but bloodless
salvation in the guts

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:35:00 PM

    very descriptive writing!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/2/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Boy! This leaves the imagination free to go wild... loved it

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/1/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... I'm glad it worked that way for you. Wild imaginations are a good thing, in my humble opinion. Jack