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Haiku

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Haiku

         
                  pen delivers
              thought into word--
                     baby cries

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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:44:00 AM
    hi my sweet lady Mehnaz..i love reading your nice write.. amazing...<3 thanks you for stopping by my wall.. appreciate it so much dearest one <3 :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:31:00 AM
    Great contrast..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Sara..
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Sweet and to the point- love it! Very well penned my dear poet friend :)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/3/2013 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anne,
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 10:54:00 AM
    And reality hits! This is a grand write Mehnaz! I truly loved reading this glorious poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/3/2013 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Russell...
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:33:00 AM
    A very interesting personification!!! wow.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    soup mail....
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:16:00 AM
    this is wonderful 11 syllables of sheer joy...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry....Was just trying to make it shorter than 17 syllable count