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Ray of Sunshine

I see these cumulus clouds before me They start to open, and what did I see Ray of sunshine bursting through the middle A sight to behold I can’t belittle It’s like the sparkle of a diamond A calming, peaceful ray, a silent sound Just as soon as I saw this gorgeous sight It vanished back to the clouds of the night
Entrant into Seren Roberts' "Shaft of light" contest 2/1/2013

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 1:06:00 PM

    great entry, Russell. This contest is inspiring some wonderful poetry.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 2:57:00 PM

    Beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Dear Russel, The important thing that you saw the light! Even for a second but it is still an eternity for you SAW IT! Keep it in your heart and into your mind it is yours, nobody can take it away from you! Beautiful writing you get a seven, good luck. Demetrios

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:31:00 PM

    I loved this one. Beautiful

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 11:48:00 AM

    You describe the beauty of light very well Russell, transcend and forever present here and there and everywhere, loved your write have a great weekend full of inspiration, xxx

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:31:00 AM

    Great imagery to this poem. Today we have clouds and now and then the sun peaks out. Yes it feels there still hope for spring. I love your couplet. it's just right for this contest. Good luck Russell. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:15:00 AM

    Love the image , beautiful ... Good Luck.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:33:00 PM

    I gave this a top rating as it is so beautiful Russell! I just loved it...best wishes in the contest...luv,Deb