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Living on The Scars

Where did the role of soul leave?
Blind in directions, lost in destination
Escaped amid to the extraneous crowds
As if gone shattered like the whisper of dusk

Peace of mind seemed to be fade and mortal
Like a starlight with less of hope
There was no love, no sorrow
Everything placed as ghosts

Will it able to question
If you hold all the answers
Will it able to survive
If you bury all of your sides

Confusion...
Mind occupied....

The uncertainty rule the roost
Thirst caressing for longing
Wondering for the cure, arrested in anxiety

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:37:00 PM

    I love this. Thats simply all there is to say. Its beautiful.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/4/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jay, pleasure to have a visit by you :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:52:00 AM

    As always you have a way with words that is so unique to you.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/3/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick :D you also had a unique idea to expressed :D
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:52:00 AM

    Sad thoughts in your beautiful poem, Yanny. - Well done! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/3/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne :D wishing you a greatdaythere :D
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:01:00 AM

    Beautiful poem!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/3/2013 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you vesna, really glad to see you around :) have a great day :D
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:18:00 AM

    Lovely write Yanny, Good Luck ...

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/1/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Menhaz :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:37:00 PM

    Nicely Written. To me; this is a glorious write. Well done!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/31/2013 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank yo Lillie your words are really uplifting, glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:59:00 PM

    Beautiful poem nice pick of words i enjoyed your writing

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/31/2013 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you April :D Glad to have a visit by you :D