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Making Love

As i lay in my bed
I can barely wait for your touch
Your just getting home
You see rose petals,candles and such
It's leading you to the bedroom
Where i am awaiting your return
Just open the door step in
Everything else is adjourn
You walk in the door
Your eyes scan my body
And excitement i perceive
Both of us do agree
You start to undress
As i watch i get a chill
You start top slow dance
Which gives me a thrill
You lay down beside me
And start to kiss my back
I moan and groan
For i am your midnight snack
You get over me and
Make sweet love to me
We move together
As one so freely



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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Can't help but laugh at your response "no just a poem lol but thanks" ..too funny. Though this is a great piece..not too explicit..but just right for the soup. Excellent!!

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 2/2/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    your welcome!and glad you find me funny
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:44:00 PM

    .................... ‡ A Beautiful Favourite, To Be Cherished ˜ 'Making Love.' *

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:37:00 PM

    ..................... ‡ Your Welcome, Sweet Beautiful, Beautiful April! *

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM

    ‡ 'You Get Over Me And, Make Sweet Love To Me.' ˜ Wow, I Can Picture Your Radiant Divine Beauty, Sweet Beautiful April! ˜ Mesmerizing, Spellbinding, Pure ˜ Someone Is In For The Time As The Treat, Of Their Life; Sooo Beautiful! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 1/31/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no just a poem lol but thanks!