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Lava Love

oh my oh my
my soul is on fire
what shall i do
when i am drowning in desire
i see your lips so full and lush
i imagine your stature so masculine
but not rough
when i see you oh my
my knees become wax
and i melt i melt
into a puddle of lava
i'm on fire burning and longing
for your very touch
just an embrace
is enough to send me to dust
but no you'll never know how i feel
i am too shy
but love you forever i will

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  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Great read, I can sympathize with such longing that isn't returned.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 4/24/2013 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you for the review!
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:10:00 AM

    Hi April, Way to go! I love your writing style - staight and smooth. The rhythm and beat in your words makes the poem a pleasure to read. Well done.I’ll be sure to look out to more from you. Vicky.

    Mitchell Avatar April Mitchell Date: 2/2/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much and i am also on writers network poetry soup allpoetry and powerpoetry!
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 1:58:00 PM

    ‡ Beautiful The Depth Of Your Love, Sweet Beautiful April ˜ Now To Rise Above Your Beauty's Shyness, That Love May Grow ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *