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True Loves Fear

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True Loves Fear

I think you're afraid to love me the way that I love you.
Too much uncertainty to see things through.

You put my heart in a safe, you think there it will not break.
but its suffocating from the fear of the risk you will not take.

Your careful what you say, more careful than before.
Afraid I can't take it, if you can't be anything more.

Don't want to lead me onto a dream you can't fulfill.
Even though there can be a way, if there is a will.

You won't let me in, not all the way.
Conversations left unspoken, forbidding me to stay.

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:14:00 AM

    Well written Amber, a good poem.- Welcome to P-Soup ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Moll Avatar Amber Moll Date: 1/31/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:27:00 AM

    Smh (shaking my head)...I just love your skill to rhyme..not only the ryhming part but your choice of words along with it. That has captivated me more while reading your work. I'm ready to read more from you...you have become a fav poet of mine.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 1/31/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol...some other readers may not have known what smh meant so thats why I did that..sorry wasn't trying to be rude..lol Can't wait to read more of your work :)
    Moll Avatar Amber Moll Date: 1/31/2013 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awe!! thanks (i know what smh means lol thank you ) I really appreciate your kindness, means so much :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Wow, very deep poem indeed. Hugs, Gail

    Moll Avatar Amber Moll Date: 1/31/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Gail! Appreciate it :)