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Hide and Seek

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Hide and Seek

Cat and Mouse: hide and seek
This could take an hour or week

No one wants to seem too bold
So we put our love on hold

A peek here and a peek there
Wondering if we really dare

Wondering what the seconds bring
Wondering if the phone will ring

Wondering, wondering:  peek a boo
You’re hiding…. but I SEE you

I see past that great big wall
Your heart’s ready for the fall

I know that you caught the bait
But I sit and wait and wait

I’m patient, got time of day
But oh, what if you get away!

Cat and mouse: hide and seek
Oh, my knees are getting weak

Oh, this heart’s sure to explode
The waiting’s gone to overload

One more second's just too much
No time for cat games and such

Hide and seek…is getting old
Here I am! My love is bold!

Ready? You'll be caught real tight!
Cause boy, your just out of sight!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Hi Eileen, love the poem, bags me be the cat lol. Really I'm just enquiring if your ok, see you have not posted, very unusual for you. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 4/17/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Mr Cat....you be good! ;) Richard....I've been better, but then again....I've been worse. Thanks so much for noticing and caring!
  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Agapi mou, this a very charming and very beautiful poem as it touches the heart and caresses the senses. Thank you for sharing!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/9/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear! Always a pleasure to hear from my esteemed Demetrios! :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Well done Eileen!! How ofte it seems just so!! Big hugs. Deb. thanks for your kind visit.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/1/2013 1:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Debbie! So kind of you! By the way...love your pic! You're so full of life and laughter! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:05:00 PM

    love the feel of the meters the rhyme make it worth the read blessed annie

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/1/2013 1:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks ever so much Annie! I appreciate your kind comment and visit! :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:03:00 PM

    v.lovely write:).am glad i stopped by

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/1/2013 1:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm so glad you did too! Expect a visit from me really soon! :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:02:00 PM

    love your subject theme here, and the way you have woven your poem within it....

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/1/2013 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Harry! Always a delight to hear from you! :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:05:00 PM

    i love the whole cat and mouse analogy - it works so well in this adorable poem! hope you made your catch...

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/31/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear Ilene! Always a pleasure to hear from you! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:29:00 AM

    This is adorable, whoever he is I'm sure he is going to love this, thank you for sharing your creative heart xxx

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/31/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear! :) Hugs!