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SCARS LEFT BEHIND

Taken out of our lives- light, bright Inferno rages through the veins Lost innocence nowhere in sight Vow to avenge inflicted pains! Our dainty girls we do adore Taken out of our lives-light bright This savagery, we abhor Wretch out justice from evil's might. Guard your daughters and hold them tight Till we ampute this mutation Taken out of our lives- light, bright Human touch has lost sensation. Harsher laws now mandatory To ring their death knell is our Right Create an unscarred history Taken out of our lives-light, bright. *The Delhi incident leaves the minds of all sensitive citizens scarred Yesha Shah

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:40:00 PM

    I share your pains Yesha.... Congrats on your win.... xx

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Yesha. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:16:00 PM

    congratulations on this great tribute....

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:41:00 AM

    I love your poem my dear friend, Yesha! It's a great write indeed! My hearty congratulations on your win! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:37:00 PM

    so happy this well deserved poem got a win. Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:58:00 AM

    Yesha :-) Congratulations with your deep winning poem... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Belated Conrats on your top spot Yesha xx

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win, Yesha. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:19:00 PM

    Yesha, a very deep poem and scar to leave behind...always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:37:00 AM

    Yesha, Congratulations on your first place with in my Scars Left Behind contest. Your poem penned such beautiful wisdom, thank you. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:37:00 AM

    good one Yesha..many congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 11:43:00 PM

    the quatern form works so well in this important type of poem because of the way it reinforces your feelings with the repeating line. So nice to see you posting these poems. If I don't come across you by chance, I just miss out on your poetry! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 9:42:00 PM

    Congrats Yesha, and like you said, it is time for tighter laws, touched by your entry, love xxx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Congratulations, excellent piece

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:50:00 AM

    That was sad happening ..It not only hurts all who know about it but also puts a fear there..It is good that they caught the ones who did the crime..Thanks for stopping by..Great write about the topic and giving honor to the person who was the victim..Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:55:00 PM

    Love your poem Yesha, a powerful meaning and pen... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:53:00 PM

    So true Yesha.The incident has left our minds scarred.In it's hightime harsher laws are enforced.Very good poem on the contest theme.

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 2/1/2013 3:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And it's hightime.......
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:51:00 PM

    Yess!!!