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Honey hku

 Horse of gambling
Public keeping lots of money
 Remain for honey.
Saroj khan[sakha]

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:22:00 AM

    Hi Saroj, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme and words nicely. I love the way you’ve related gambling and horse - a horse gallops - such is the marathon ingambling, well stated. I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:41:00 PM

    So nice to read your verse this evening, gambling is very dangerous! Light & Love