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Acoustic of POETRY

P rose unfolds revealing the deepest inner desires
O nly a few words transcend into a multitude of  meaning.
E ven after he explains something is lost in translation,
T he simplest things made beautiful by the words, they
R eminding us we’re not alone, increase
Y earning to become one with the experience

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Wayland I like the enjambment in this , very good...David

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/31/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for your comments.
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 1:50:00 AM

    Well done, you did your homework well....Seren

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/31/2013 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much for you lovely comment. the lines are supposed to continue, right? I mean the last word of one line flows to the next, right? I saw some where they used punctuation and that seemed to be the case. Thanks again for your comment.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:01:00 PM

    I see you are trying out a few forms on the soup... I'm impressed... but if you truly want to wow me... I would like to see you try a slam... or an epic alliteration. Wayland, you are awesome... and i'm kidding about the impress me part. I love your poetry already. "-) pd

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/31/2013 12:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Linda, and I will try them. I had said something about the epic alliteration, but like I said I was confusing forms lol. Thanks always for such wonderful comments.