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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:24:00 PM

    Everything in this world is an illusion and its good to know that even fear passes into truth. The truth that being created in God's image has nothing to do with the physical body. And there are happy endings for all when the vale is lifted from their eyes.-------Stopped by for a visit David;your friend Michael

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 4:15:00 PM

    aaawww... a very lovely write. I have no words that would suffice to the description of this poem but I really liked it. IT was sad yet sweetish but I really enjoyed it. Always, Becca

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 5:04:00 PM

    to the heart David And to the soul. Let us never forget humanity. Thank you !

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:47:00 PM

    A chilling write and so well put to a deadly ending. Thank you

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:13:00 AM

    You've got a unique style

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 4:26:00 AM

    Well written!! I liked it very much. Thanks for posting :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:44:00 PM

    How awful! And how very sad, how very true. Thank you. J

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 4:51:00 AM

    David; This is all so true. Thousands of lives have been lost like this and in other ways too. It is just becaus to some people all that matters is mone and not human lives. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:23:00 PM

    David, hon, I loved this challenge (even if I @#!% ^ like a trucker while I worked on it for 2 days!) and then, to my horror, I realized I did it wrong (errr? I think?) so I removed my entry. Now, I'm totally confused. This example shows what I ended up doing. Your first lines do what I did line 1) start with a con and end with a con. Line 2) start with a vow end with a vow... Can you clarify? I may give it another go ... and cry doing it (lol! JK!) but I thought I'd better check! (cont)

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan Date: 2/5/2013 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If this examples first five lines are okay, then I will re-enter what I slaved over. If they are not, I'll try again. Now, if I must redo, I'd love you to at least read what I did (can't remember if you're a "I don't wanna know who wrote what" judge) I am happy with final piece ... don't know what to do!
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:19:00 PM

    This is an incredible example...also a very sad story, but a great write! Thank you for all your comments...xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:48:00 PM

    ok so this is an example. Maybe I can do this after all. For some reason I got it in my head you wanted alternating consonant vowel WITHIN every single word, and I was thinking WHAT???? hahaha

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:46:00 PM

    David, thank you for always, stopping by to say hi... about your poem: it sure has a sad meaning to reality... always~ TEX

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:42:00 PM

    i'm hoping these suffering people get a better life next time on earth:( good point made here mate...

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:15:00 PM

    The poem stands by itself, with amazing content and a story. When one thinks beyond all that, and applies the rules of your new contest idea....it's a wow!!! A difficult task that you made seem natural. Great work, David...and a great idea is your challenge!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Wow David. This is strong and kinda eerie. I just love it!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:01:00 AM

    You conquered a difficult task with this consonant-vowel task.Ow geee the story gave me chills in my spine..Scary to imagine myself being there..captured and thrown at sea to die.Powerful!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:51:00 AM

    creatively written poem my friend David... like it..Thanks for sharing and Have a blessed day always :) Hugs, maria

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 7:20:00 PM

    WOWSER! You delivered! This has such flow that I would never have noticed the vowel/consonant thing... not one choppy/sloppy here. Well, you've got me thinking, but I don't think I can do this even HALF as well as you have. I hope you've created a new form... this is mindblowing! Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Wow...powerful poem following the consonant, vowels theme of your contest. Empressive !! I'll never top this, but will give it a go.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:28:00 AM

    Hi David brilliant my friend and there is still to much greed today, take care and have a great weekend, all the bst Owen

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Seems to me I read the book. Can't remember the title, but, like your fine poem, it was an eye-opener. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:10:00 AM

    you gone done again,, this is so amazing David,,, no movie heroes here, you write as it was, and the portrait that you plant in the mind, so vivid so bloody honest,,, to fav

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:08:00 PM

    A powerful poem here by you David.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words in my pages.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:27:00 PM

    A very touching poem you penned here David. Unfortunately this kind of thing exists in the world today. Thank you for commenting on my poem Shades of Hope. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:43:00 PM

    This is such a sad and emotional write! I really loved reading this poem that is packed with feelings of pain and loss this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, a terror of life and death, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:09:00 PM

    A powerful and moving poem David, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Oh now THAT'S what I'm talking about!!! Excellent write Sir!!!David you culminated so much emotion in this! I love it!! Well done!! Well done!!! Big Hugs love ya Cap'n deb