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True Peace

Moonlight shining bright
Midnight sky now ever calm
Childhood remembered

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Love the inner peace found while reading your haiku. At times I wish to look up and feel again... Wayland, you are getting good-errrr than good... LOL...I said GOOD-ERRRR on the soup. Anyways, love the tiny twinkle feel you are sharing with us tonight. I wish I could share this with myself.. but, somehow all my childhood memories and excitement are lost. God bless you, with the smooth haiku. xox~PD

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/31/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks agian for your lovely thoughtful comments. Good-errrr, is better than whatever it was that I made fun of myself about before lol.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:29:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your descriptive but short lines..Sara

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your comment and reading my poem.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Thanks for reading my Haiku, for me it is a frustrating form, I havn't got the hang of it yet. If you want to learn more contact Debbie Guzzi. Like you I tend to write them from my own perspective which supposedly is incorrect. Even though this may be technically wrong I still enjoy the many Haikus like this that I read on the soup. I doubt I will ever get the hang of it.

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah there's some little aspect that I'm probably not getting, but I will definitely contact her to see if I'm on the right track. Thank you so much for your comment.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:07:00 AM

    i think he's got it, well done a nice Haiku..Seren

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your comment.