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True Peace

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True Peace

Moonlight shining bright
Midnight sky now ever calm
Childhood remembered

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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:37:00 PM
    A very nice haiku! Always, Laura

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 12/12/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Everyone who tells me how hard the villanelle is I should tell them to write a few of these lol. I have spent more time studying this form than any of the others. It's such a deep form, it's like take two random thoughts, first thing that comes to mind, and now tie them together. Well not exactly, because I'd probably be good at that lol. Thanks for all the comments again.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Love the inner peace found while reading your haiku. At times I wish to look up and feel again... Wayland, you are getting good-errrr than good... LOL...I said GOOD-ERRRR on the soup. Anyways, love the tiny twinkle feel you are sharing with us tonight. I wish I could share this with myself.. but, somehow all my childhood memories and excitement are lost. God bless you, with the smooth haiku. xox~PD

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 1/31/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks agian for your lovely thoughtful comments. Good-errrr, is better than whatever it was that I made fun of myself about before lol.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your descriptive but short lines..Sara

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    Date: 1/30/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your comment and reading my poem.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Thanks for reading my Haiku, for me it is a frustrating form, I havn't got the hang of it yet. If you want to learn more contact Debbie Guzzi. Like you I tend to write them from my own perspective which supposedly is incorrect. Even though this may be technically wrong I still enjoy the many Haikus like this that I read on the soup. I doubt I will ever get the hang of it.

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 1/30/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah there's some little aspect that I'm probably not getting, but I will definitely contact her to see if I'm on the right track. Thank you so much for your comment.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:07:00 AM
    i think he's got it, well done a nice Haiku..Seren

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 1/30/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your comment.