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Extremities of destiny defined

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Extremities of destiny defined

                                        


                                             

                                                      ghazal notes twirl,
                                                  summer sun on dirty panes--
                                                     old man picks rags

                                                        lean form bends
                                                    under heavy garbage bag...   
                                                       a Mercedes honks
      
                                                        

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Mehnaz , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:22:00 PM

    I could just see the scene for your description was so well done..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/1/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sara.
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:58:00 AM

    wow message read and understood...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/1/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks harry...
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:10:00 PM

    wow you can sure see the contrast shown in that second haiku. it is sickening how rich the rich are, isn't it?

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/1/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Andre