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Flowers of love
Looking sweet and smell pretty 
Giving life to all 

Lovely Humming Bird 
Sings a love song to the soul 
Empty hearts renewed

Passion projected 
Valentines now on the brink 
Why only today?



Poems by Wayland bunch written 1/29/13 10:06pm Ok these are the revisions of my Haiku that have nature references

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  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:10:00 PM

    yes, WHY only today?? Wouldn't it be amazing if we celebrated love constantly? Very cool idea. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:18:00 PM

    Hey there, very nice. Congratulations, very sharp writing

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 2/16/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for reading and your comment.
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Hi Wayland, , thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 2/16/2013 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much for your comment and a wonderful contest that you hosted, that allowed me to investigate this form.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:39:00 PM

    awe... I like the way, you did not remove the first ones you did... thanks for getting your eyes checked... LOL... <---kidding... glad you caught the note about nature... give me give me....~PD

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/31/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah I was sure you were right. I had just got so caught up trying to learn about the form I missed that detail. Yeah I decided to leave them. I have yet to remove a poem yet. I was gonna remove that hello-goodbye one, but I keep the count running lol.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:21:00 AM

    Hi Wayland loved these haiku's very inspiring, thanks for your comment on the hash, all the best Owen

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your wonderful comments, they are inspiring in themself.
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Loved both versions....Seren

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Seren for your very nice comment.
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Great poem! I love to write Haiku too!

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/30/2013 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gracias. These were my first attempts at the haiku, but I do like the form, although I'm still not totally familiar with it.