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Rachel Stcross

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Rachel Stcross

Legs long and smooth
Finger nails painted to prove
Eyes made of passion
And her essence perfume
Lips made for saying "Amore"
Hair her crowning glory
A body unrivaled with words
And feet high heels perfectly curved

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:38:00 PM
    You have painted a nice picture with words. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:00:00 PM
    What eclectic taste you have; the roving eye adding up the plusses make me wonder if there was a score. Great one again John! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
    A portrait in loveliness of words! Cynthia

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:48:00 PM
    She'll definitely love this! Well written and beautifully written~ thank you for your kind attention on my work by the way--I greatly appreciate your support. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 6:56:00 AM
    Yes, interesting that you would pen these lines for John..Sara

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    Date: 2/8/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well maybe he is the cross________..Sara
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 9:26:00 PM
    John, Rachel will love this... lovely...LINDA

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:33:00 AM
    ...But I have bad news for you...I dont want to be rude...I dont want to burst your bubble...but....I think that John doesn't have smooth legs or "finger nails painted"... : ) Im sorry.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Nice tribute, John!