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Lekker contest

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Lekker contest

L ooking good she thinks, looking slim
E yeing the glow that's coming from within 
K nowing that all eyes will be upon her
K neeling at the altar will be LEKKER
E very person will have eyes that stream
R econstructed legs has allowed this dream

D oesn't know when pain will ease
R emarked on the baskets of doves for release
E yes now misted over Tad must be my guide
A t the stroke of 12 ,my husband will be at my side
M aking me for sure the happiest bride

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:41:00 PM
    love your winning poem..PD

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Fantastic, you are so talented, congrats!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:17:00 PM
    : ) Congratulations on a very fine win, Seren! Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:08:00 PM
    What a great write !! Excellent story within too. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Nice acrostic Seren congrats on your 1st place win xxx

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win and a lekker of a poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:53:00 PM
    Writing with thoughtful intelligence captivates me....and it is rhythmical..good job.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:30:00 PM
    What a great approach to the contest.......and acrostic poem.....this is a delight!! Congratulations, Seren!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Beautiful! You did it using the acrostic form; very nice, Seren! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Congrats on you big win. I loved your Acrostic. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/28/2013 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie...Seren
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Seren, congratulations on your 1st place win in my LEKKER Contest with this excellent Acrostic poem. Love, Su

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/28/2013 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Su, I am in shock ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:17:00 AM
    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Enjoyed your creative work for the contest..Winners' circle for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awww Sara thats a nice thing to say, we will see....Seren
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Really, you should catch and release.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sorry I dont know what you mean, can you explain please....Seren
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:15:00 AM
    Star, ha ...happy that your legs are fine, PS. only got your word for that lol.. I like it...David soup mail

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dafydd, lol you doubt me , thanks for liking my Lekker....Seren
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:47:00 AM
    Ah ha, now I know what an acoustic poem is. I would have felt silly looking it up now that it's so obvious. I wasn't going to look at this, not knowing the form, but glad I did. I learned something. I was actually going to write one of these the other day lol, glad I stuck to free verse and learned what the style is first. Now my thankfulness is a duality like everything else I see lol, one for sharing this wonderful poem, the other for inadvertently teaching me something.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my pleasure in being able to help you...glad you enjoy some of my work...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Dreaming of getting married is the most wonderful dream of any single woman. You have made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together well here.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert for stopping by and leaving a comment......Seren