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THE WAY WAR VETERANS SUFFER FOR OURS HARD WORK

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THE WAY WAR VETERANS SUFFER FOR OURS HARD WORK

I look and saw how much war veterans like me suffer when we come back from war,We don't have anyone to comfort us,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,I look and saw how much war veterans like me suffer with tears in ours and sadness on ours faces,We don't have anyone to comfort us,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,I look and saw how much war veterans like me suffer,where we should be treated right,we are treated wrong,we have no one to comfort us,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,I look and saw how much war veterans like me suffer,where we should be treated fairly we are treated unfairly,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,We don't have anyone to comfort us,I look and saw how much war veterans like me suffer,where we should be treated kind,we are treated unkind,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,We don't have anyone to comfort us,I still can see the tears of war veterans like me suffing from coming back from war,We don't have anyone to comfort us,the power is on the side of those that beat us down,I look and saw war veterans like me suffer,where we should be treated good we are treated badly,I still can see the tears of war veterans like me suffing who are still on this earth while ours conrades have paid the price and die for this country,We still don't have anyone to comfort us, the power is on the side of those that beat us down,I look and saw the country on 9/11 when the enemy came and bomb the USA,We was there to comfort the country and the people that lost love ones,the power was on the side of the military of the USA,We beat them down,so I ask this question????? Who are going to comfort us now,we are no longer soldiers but war veterans all mess up we was not born this way but got this way for fighting for ours country////// SSG Jack Thomas Kirt

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:23:00 AM
    awesome narration Jack,,, this is a brilliant account of how it really is... needed to be written...

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Jack, a very well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems and thoughts here with us. - Good luck. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:25:00 AM
    What you just wrote is a narrative, Jack..I am sending you soup mail..you click on your INBOX to read it. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Welcome to poetry soup, please don't hesitate to ask if you need help. Thanks for your contest entry please add a pertanant haiku. Light & Love