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Back to Lost

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Back to Lost

Looks at the roads been travelled
     every morn when he awakes,
Smiles at his few glories
     and sheds tears for his mistakes.
Can feel the ancient breezes
     that have long since passed this way,
Their echoes are still ringing 
     through the sins for which he’ll pay.
Been forced into the valleys,
     his journeys kept to the dark,
The guiding light's holding hope
     in nothing more than a spark.
Prayers remain unrecognized
     deep in shadows of his gloom,
The mirror keeps his secret
     underneath a pale costume.
He’s become but a number
     on a faded page long creased,
And hung up like memories
     in the bellies of the priests.



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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Powerful, again great rhythm and rhymes throughout your poem. A fantastic effort and a wonderful read, well done.

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Very provocative! When you force a man not to act like a man that's what happens. Light & Love

    Larson Avatar Daniel Larson Date: 7/4/2013 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A belated thanks for your kind thoughts
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:42:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poem Daniel, glad I was pointed in your direction ..Seren

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:31:00 PM

    I really like your poem back to lost. Very gripping keeps me wanting to read more

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Daniel, I'm glad I had the privilege to read your poetry today. I'll be reading more of your poems as well. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Daniel!!, So glad I stopped by--This is more than just a posting of rhyme, it is a magnificent short story left to peruse again and again, a fav of mine!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:38:00 PM

    !!!