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Haiku


Senryu
See the eagle fly
Prisoner of its nature
Freedom an illusion

Haiku
Spring, old sparrows die
Fall exhausted down from sky
A nest too many


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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Dear Jan - Only you would say the eagle is a 'prisoner of its nature' and here I sit agreeing. Oh those updrafts. Flight is so exhausting. How does the hummingbird do it? Imagine the strength of his heart. You shine in these two like sun on a river. Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 1/31/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear