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Hallelujah

Hallelujah

A faith-lit  path in the promethean land
Holding no wrath   and ever at hand
You didn’t take kindly to it, did you?
Measuring out truth in doses of myth
How  could  one miss to be done with
To meld with the magic of  hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
There was no need for unusual hurry
Though  caught in a malignant worry 
Stealing the light from  stars were you
Striving for miracles  through dare-do’s
Reuse the old ruse through and through
Given once the heave-ho, the hallelujah.
Hallelujah….hallelujah
Hallelujah….hallelujah
And from the dark  the blue bird sang
One  heard its colors as out it rang
It did not declaim in haste like you 
Shifting the forsaken  to the forefront
Gifting hate  to the  mate upfront
Time to pay up one’s debts to  hallelujah
Hallelujah….hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
The voice that made the wayfarer  halt
The choice he wished without a fault
In the bylanes , detours crossed by you
Deprived of the lease that ran out of heat
Meeting to debate, and to again meet
Helped on the quest by reassuring hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
Whoever it was that told of a  truce
And  the  promise that would seduce
The blight that blinds all but you
Nowhere  was it a neat entity
Wherever we searched for  purity
To fall back at last tired on hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
Hallelujah …hallelujah
Shivering in the cold of river of sands
Sharing our paltry minds and hands
Basics are wearing  thin for you
Suffering  holocausts to  arrive at last
Ashore and safe, to derive a blast
Drowning our agonies in  hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah
Hallelujah…hallelujah

29th Jan 2013
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
An imperfect and poor  imitation  of Leonard Cohen’s “Hallelujah”, submitted for FRANK H’s contest

Entry for pd's second chance poems on 21 feb 13

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Jag' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Jag, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:35:00 PM

    Jag, I reread it. I think you did have all the right number of syllables. I have been going through your poems looking for one I have not commented to. Maybe I should try an older page!! I'll look a bit more now.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:28:00 PM

    well, maybe it is not perfect to his rhythm? But I love the words of this one and I am wondering if you got on the winners list or not. I'll go see. I didn't make it on. I hope yours made it.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:21:00 PM

    Ohhhh Nice one Jag!!! this is really great...

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:40:00 PM

    This is well done, Jag! Absolutely great imagery which should make this one for The Winners' List! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:57:00 AM

    Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:04:00 AM

    hi dearest Jag.. this superb.. luv it congratulation for the contest :) <3