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GUN

                                                                      



                                                    A gun is a deadly weapon
                                           It can kill people with wasted reason

                                                     Authorized to have this
                                                 Only the army and the police

                                               Don’t use it to point to a person
                                           You will landed straight to the prison

                                      A gun is an instrument for an unending war
                                          Civilians traumatized for a painful scar

                            So please have some conscience not to use it barbarically
                                      Coz it will cause our life and so don’t be a folly 



                                                          January 29, 2013
                                               For Gwendolen "Gun" contest
                                                        1ST PLACE WINNER



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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:23:00 PM

    congrats on your win Maria

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:50:00 PM

    So true, maria. Congrats on the winners list.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your number 1 Maria luv xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Many congrats Maria for this well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:09:00 PM

    Maria, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Maria great lines, good luck and I love your avatar...David

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:33:00 AM

    Weapons should never have been invented - The worst thing I see Maria, is when small children get "toy" guns! - A good poem for the contest, good luck - hope you win. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:38:00 PM

    So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:46:00 PM

    Hi Maria, I must say - excellent write! You've tackled the theme of gun usage very well. Well done. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 3:11:00 PM

    Excellent work poet. I love this poem. Can you look at my poem

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:52:00 PM

    ..."*.)? Ps., Passing Back By, My Sweet Beautiful Maria, As Saying 'Thank You' For Your Precious Loving Heart's Kind Visit ~ Stay Sweet, And, Have A Very Beautiful Day ~ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:19:00 AM

    i fear the mind set behind the gun, Maria,, but your point is taken,, in this a wonderful poem...

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:14:00 AM

    It is so sad that humanity has not learned to love instead of hating. A thoughtfuyl poem. Thank you for your comment on my Teddy Bear poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:13:00 AM

    ‡ First There Were Stones, Which Cain Used On Abel; Then There Were Sling Shots, Which David Used On Goliath; Then There Were Swords, Which The Centurion Used To Pierce The Side Of Heavens Messiah; Then Came Gun Powder, Which Certain European Nations Used To Dismantle While Figuratively Raping Africa And The Americas Soon To Follow; Then, Came Fighter Jets With Nuclear Bombs Psychos And Ballerinas, Proclaiming, A Right To Arms ˜ LOL, Your Sooo Beautiful Precious Maria! ˜ My Love Always, Rachel *