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Scars Left Behind

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Scars Left Behind which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Scars Left Behind

Behind friendly smile and bright eyes are scars
left by raw pain and sorrow
Heart broken when love died





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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Seren :-) Congratulations with your deep winning poem... always~ LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/7/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda, how are you these days? ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 1:00:00 AM
    Beautiful and lovely piece,Seren. Great job.Congratulations on your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:14:00 AM
    Congratulations Seren this so sad girl xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Seren oft it only takes a few lines and a close look at pain filled eyes to surmise the pain one has gone through, congrats for your win my dear, so sad you had to hurt, to beautiful a soul, hope joy finds you and may happiness be close at hand love xxx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Congrats on win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/5/2013 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard ....Seren
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Your words are so true. Those are scars that are not easy to heal. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/31/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Ok the education continues. I saw the similarity between this and the haiku and had to look up the form. I like this poem alot, it's sad and powerful, probably my favorite type of poem as far as effect. I have a question if I may ask, is the form like the haiku, I mean I understand the syllables, but are the three lines like the haiku? I will do more research, but someone with personal experience is better? I am considering wandering away from my sonnets and couplets, trying some new things.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    the syllable count is 10/7/6 I just look up the form and try to obey...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:42:00 PM
    A sensitive sijo, Seren. you are that kind of a poet!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmm is supposed to be a Kimo haha, oops have I done it wrong Andrea, I did a 10/7/6/ form...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Wow ,, are you back , this is good xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/29/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    How is the sun? grrrrr. You enjoying yourself....Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/29/2013 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Margherita
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:47:00 AM
    And as they say, all scars heal with time, then you will be feeling pretty fine :) love Elizabeth

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/29/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes I know Elizabeth ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:23:00 AM
    with this poem Seren i feel those moments, this is really beautiful in a very sad way....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/29/2013 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry, i am getting there...Seren