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haiku and questionku contest

LOVES TEARS

love is in the air
clouds like billowing hearts...
lightening hits target


LOVE CALLS

noise of loud thunder
drowning out all reasoning....
body answers call

LOVES NEEDS FULFILLED

loves seed planted
well watered will grow....
Is wedding ring needed?

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:31:00 PM

    congrats on a wonderful win Seren

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:39:00 PM

    Big congratulations my dear friend Seren for your amazing chain of haiky poem and fanastic win! I enjoyed reading reading them! A great write indeed ! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:17:00 PM

    many congrats on your win in the contest Seren with this wonderful set of Haikus

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very fine win, Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/16/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Annalise.....Seren
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:57:00 PM

    SEREN, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/16/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Linda , i think its polite to enter a contest if someone has taken the trouble to run one. Thank you ......Seren
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:09:00 AM

    Wow, these are really good. I really like all of them. I can just keep reading and reading them, they are very powerful.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/30/2013 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Wayland, I see you have been reading most of them...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:48:00 PM

    oooh, great metaphorical series!! I enjoyed these.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/30/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea...Seren
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Hi Seren, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the forms superbly. I love the way you’ve started at the beginning of love and shown its progression, and alluded to the question of marriage - excellent. I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/29/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Vicky .....Seren
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:14:00 PM

    These are brilliantly written Haiku and Questionku! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a splendid piece, Great Work!!