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2 Haiku 1 Questionku

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a love note

crumpled behind his back-

the doorbell rings  



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dawn breaks through stain-glass

upon her naked flesh

a rainbow dances 



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whispers of passion

upon her soft neck-

will she feel my fear?




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2 Haiku 1 Questionku







~



the doorbell rings-  

a love note

crumpled behind his back




~

  

dawn breaks through stained glass-

upon her naked flesh

a rainbow dances 



~



passionate whispers

upon her soft neck-

will she feel my fear?





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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:49:00 PM
    This one is so good. you know I loved it before. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:08:00 PM
    awesome entry, congrats on your win Rick

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Wonderfully written words, congrats on your win Rick. Connie

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:55:00 PM
    RICK, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:13:00 PM
    best ones I saw tonight!!! And what were you asking me about words and definitions? To find definitions I just google them!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Rick, she will only feel what you want her to feel. Your haiku are quite beautiful, but I never heard of the "questionq." Guess I was gone too long. I'm still ill, but have to do something from time to time and this is where my heart gravitates. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:29:00 PM
    These are successful Haiku and Questionku Rick! I believe these are perfect for the contest! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!