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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2013 6:10:00 PM
"my sweet Alexander. " it makes one want to sigh!! You sure are good with this kind of poem. This contest scared me away!!But your daring paid off and now a big congrats is owed you for your win!
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/22/2013 2:05:00 PM
Wow heavy! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tim Ryerson
Date: 2/22/2013 1:40:00 PM
'A wafting scent lingers still on mangled breath'...Oh my Rose, what a stunning line, as is the entire poem...My heart tells me this must be at least partially based on real-life experience..It has the feeling of someone who has been there, though I could be wrong...Congrats my friend - Tim
Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/22/2013 7:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/22/2013 7:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:05:00 PM
congrats on a great win Rose
Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations Rose ....Seren
Donna Jones
Date: 2/21/2013 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 PM
Mystic, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
Carrie Richards
Date: 2/21/2013 4:46:00 PM
Oh wow!! This should be placed higher on the list........it is stunning, and so filled with classic vintage poetry! Lovely!
Michael Smith
Date: 2/21/2013 12:16:00 PM
Thou hast left no stone unturned in this delight for Alexander. congratulations on thine win.
Debra Squyres
Date: 2/21/2013 12:04:00 PM
Wow !! Great write in the old English form...love it !! Congrats on your win.
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2013 9:17:00 AM
wow super good well done flower xx
David Williams
Date: 1/29/2013 12:30:00 PM
woohoo Mine own true fair maiden, thou hast bloweth mine own socks offeth....David
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/29/2013 12:11:00 PM
Mystic Rose, you really have a talent for the old English style. The last two lines made me think of my late husband. Very touching and romantic, dear. Do I know you be another name? Love, Carolyn
Cyndi MacMillan
Date: 1/29/2013 4:32:00 AM
This is soooooooooooooo good! Old English is so hard to capture ... the last two lines are my fave and wrap it up as it should. The 8th line had me wondering... HIS sigh? But then again, you are speaking of dreams and his sweet wind (his communion with you) Such a sad and powerful piece. It's 630 here. Thought of you... was going to soupie you, but I see you've closed that option. I understand. Something truly awful must have happened... so sorry dear. Hugs, Cyndi hope things get better! xox
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 1/28/2013 10:07:00 PM
Really tremendous, Mystic Rose, very difficult for me to follow,though!! Jag
Rachel St.Cross
Date: 1/28/2013 7:55:00 PM
‡ I Know That I Would Have Grasp This Heart's Wonderful As Moving Verse, Sweet Beautiful Vienna ˜ Had I Any Poetic Knowledge In Re Classical Or More Accurately Perhaps, The Lingo Given This Particular Age In Time ? I Guess A Comparison Would Be This, Someone Expert In Fine Wines Of Which I Am Neither The Above ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *
Russell Sivey
Date: 1/28/2013 7:42:00 PM
I just love how you spoke in the thees and thous! This is a truly tremendous write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!