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Beside a Rippling Stream

Under star studded sky
And bright moon low
I wrap you in
My loving glow
Whispering words
Of love you so
As camp fire burns
With flames high
We drift as lovers
In night sky
Cuddle up tight
In lovers delight
Beside a rippling
Stream tonight

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 10:46:00 AM

    ‡ What A Beautiful Image, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth! ˜ Sooo Soft These Banks Their Pastel Stars, Gentle Flames Swaying In Moonlight Rippling Dreams, Perfumed In Love ˜ Van Gogh Himself Aneath A Joyful Star Filled Night Could Not Have Brushed A More Beautiful Canvas ˜ A Favourite To Be Cherished As Your Beauty's Self And Thank You, For Such A Sweet And Lovely Visit; 'Beautiful!' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 4/26/2013 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweet beautiful Rachel, love as ever Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:04:00 PM

    NICE INTROSPECTION OF ONES LOVE FOR ANOTHER XDAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:51:00 PM

    A wonderful piece of art.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:48:00 AM

    Oh as the stream flows so does your wonderful poetry...this is so good...

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/29/2013 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM

    This makes me long for the summer, a campfire, and a night under the pinetrees. Lovely poem, Elizabeth!

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carrie, me too :) love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:36:00 PM

    Hello Elizabeth, Very bright very beautiful. A drifting view.. love the passionate moment to come :-) always~ LINDA

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/29/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 4:58:00 PM

    Oh the romance just flows through this magical stream you penned here. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing Elizabeth. Hugs and luv, Gail

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/29/2013 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail, love Elizabeth